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I guess it would kind of help if I gave a setting and such!XD.Story follows the lives of 7 friends and their lives through middle school and high school.I drew the inspiration for it from the web comic Bittersweet Candy Bowl.Now at first it seems too similar,however I have a lot more plot changes in store that are sure to make up for that.I have a friend currently editing the original chapter 1 so once that's done I'll repost it.If any of you aspiring artists out there want to be a part of this,please don't hesitate to send me a note!
My fingers have BROKEN!
Here's two of the most comical sections from the dialog I'm writing,enjoy!
From Chapter 31
Derrick:I tried catnip once.
Kary:Yeah and mom smoked your ass for it!
Derrick:So sue me!I was 12 what did I know?How could I have known it wasn't garlic flakes when I put it on a burger and my fur fell out.
Flora:*thinks of a hairless Derrick and giggles*Uncle Ricky would be funny wiff no hair.
Andy:*pictures it*Hahahahah!
Jessica:*sniffs the air*Hey…I smell…roses.
Sarah:*sniff*I do too!
Scarlet:*gazing outside*Petties!
Sarah:*follows her daughter's gaze*Well I'll be!We've got a rose garden!
And indeed there is a garden of roses ju
Chapter one,done!
Well,it took me roughly an hour but it's done.Chapter 1 of Phleas!It will be drawn and posted on dA on (DECISION OF ARTIST!PLEASE WAIT).
Chapter 1,The Study partner.
(John laying on the grass in a park)
John:*Sigh* Perfect day!
(Tom walks over)
Tom:Hey!Forgetting something?
(John sits up and looks)
John: Oh,hey Tom…um…what am I forgetting?
(Tom crosses his arms and raises one eyebrow)
Tom:What day is it?
John:*pause*….um……*shocked look*CRAAAP!
(Flip to Sabrina’s house,John walks up to her)
John:Hey Sabrina,happy birthday!*smiles*
Sabrina*pause*…*blush*..*glare*
John:Ahah…eheh…I’m
The Gang of Phleas
Here's the info on the Phleas gang.
Sabrina
Our moderately gothic female protagonist.This purple Burmese enjoys watching horror movies and giving pervs a broken nose.Just ask Eric!She seems to be a tomboy but has some very un-masculine hobbies.Even though she shows no apparent interest in John,her well orchestrated dislike of him and his nature masks a growing affection,one that will probably show….later on.
John
Kind,intelligent,and very active,this Abyssinian has an acute sense of others.He can tell how someone's feeling simply by speaking to them for a few short seconds.As our male protagonist he does his best to protect Sabrina f
First chapter of Phleas (sample)
Hi,I'm Jay.This is a written 'script' you could say of a comic I'm working on.Since I earlier found I can't draw for crap,I'd like to give a sample to you fellow deviants in order to get some volunteer artists.The comic,in my head at least,is similar to Bittersweet Candy Bowl
http://www.bittersweetcandybowl.com/c1/p1.html
Here's a sample of the script:
(John laying on the grass in a park)
John:*Sigh* Perfect day!
(Tom walks over)
Tom:Hey!Forgetting something?
(John sits up and looks)
John: Oh,hey Tom…um…what am I forgetting?
(Tom crosses his arms and raises one eyebrow)
Tom:What day is it?
John:*pause*….um……
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